Cinquain
Wandering
Aimlessly
Through life
A confused state
To explore my options
Because I have no major
posted by Alex @ 12:36 AM
3 comments
Wandering
posted by Alex @ 12:36 AM
3 comments
3 Comments:
I like this poem. It really conveys a feeling of being lost, which I can definitely related to even though I have a major.
This is very interesting. My only comment about format is that the syllables should increase with each line. You go from "aimlessly" which is three syllables to "through life" which is only two. Otherwise, it looks great!
Great poem! I love how cinquains allow you to get right to the point. I know everyone can relate to that feeling of being lost so it's very applicable. The format is slightly off, as pointed out by shae, but the content is succint and intriguing so it outweighs the minor error.
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