Cinquain - "Deriding"

Deriding,

succinctly,
in debate class,
to feed my fragile ego.
Sweaty palms on the podium:
I listen intently to the faults of your speech.



Deriding, (title -ing +MV)

succinctly, (fun adverb)
in debate class, (simple prep. phrase)
to feed my fragile ego. (verb-inf. phrase the corrected part)
Sweaty palms on the podium: (noun)
I listen intently to the faults of your speech. (adv. clause)