Gum
Chewing
Gum
Fresh Mint
Four days old
Not so fresh, now
Found beneath my chair
posted by eye'la @ 4:10 PM
5 comments
Tuesday, May 23, 2006
Gum
Fresh Mint
Four days old
Not so fresh, now
Found beneath my chair
5 Comments:
Yeah... that wouldn't be so fresh...
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Hum... yes I think I did this wrong... missed a few details in the directions, and opted for humor rather than precision...
This is quite the funniest I have read. Good job. You can always claim to have used poetic license on the form.
Ayla--Your cinquain seems more adjectival than adverbial. I think that's the problem overall. But your fans like it!
vtb
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