Monday, May 22, 2006

Cinquin

Riding
quickly
for my sanity
high-spirited horse
to rest a heavy soul
when all else seems naught.

3 Comments:

At 9:41 PM, Blogger eye'la said...

Uh, I can't see anything... I do believe I'm missing something important on the details of this assignment though, so beyond just thinking it's rather nice, I'm no real help.

You have a horse?

 
At 9:53 PM, Blogger Vicki TB said...

Shannon--The noun line needs to be adverbial, like a direction or a place (mountain trail, for ex.); otherwise, perfect. vtb

 
At 9:54 PM, Blogger Vicki TB said...

Shannon--The noun line needs to act adverbially--a direction or a place, maybe. For example, mountain trail. Otherwise, really good.

 

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