Cinquin
Riding
quickly
for my sanity
high-spirited horse
to rest a heavy soul
when all else seems naught.
posted by Anonymous @ 12:14 AM
3 comments
Monday, May 22, 2006
quickly
for my sanity
high-spirited horse
to rest a heavy soul
when all else seems naught.
3 Comments:
Uh, I can't see anything... I do believe I'm missing something important on the details of this assignment though, so beyond just thinking it's rather nice, I'm no real help.
You have a horse?
Shannon--The noun line needs to be adverbial, like a direction or a place (mountain trail, for ex.); otherwise, perfect. vtb
Shannon--The noun line needs to act adverbially--a direction or a place, maybe. For example, mountain trail. Otherwise, really good.
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